BONJOUR Quelqu'un peut m'aider svp pour ce devoir d'anglais à remettre?

Sana, she is my new friend in school,i'm loving her very much she is sweat, pretty and fashion girl as well...i visited her home last time. Well, she is living in a wonderful house well organized and decorated specially her owned room it's amising .. and honestly it's architect attracked me so much..they are small familly, her mother is a teacher, an english teacher, and her father is a doctor, and her little brother who has only 3 years  is smart kid but he is too noisy. my new friend is really adorable and lovely and she is chocolate lover just like me...  (pour le temps utilisé: i tryed to make a situation to introduce the person by talking about her so i used past and while talking i used present)