j'ai un dm d'anglais pour demain sur les inuits et mon niveau d'anglais est juste catastrophique donc si une âme charitable veut bien essayer de décrypter et de
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j'ai un dm d'anglais pour demain sur les inuits et mon niveau d'anglais est juste catastrophique donc si une âme charitable veut bien essayer de décrypter et de corriger mes fautes je lui en serais très reconnaissante.
mon sujet est: after back in england, the narrator writes an article comparing the inuit european ways of life
je dois faire au minimum 200 mots
When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :
I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestyles
First, Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when european rest in his house all the year because of his job
Secundly, Europeans have socials network but are alone when inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's school
Next, Inuit lives in skin tnts with whalebone frame works that are really diferent compare with the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in London
All most, Inuits are mindful of nature but europeans have polluting way of life whith cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.
To finish, the european's life its stressfully at the opposite of the inuit's life because of the inuit's area where all are white, appeasing, beautifull andcalmness
But if you go in inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there are fish.
mon sujet est: after back in england, the narrator writes an article comparing the inuit european ways of life
je dois faire au minimum 200 mots
When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :
I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestyles
First, Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when european rest in his house all the year because of his job
Secundly, Europeans have socials network but are alone when inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's school
Next, Inuit lives in skin tnts with whalebone frame works that are really diferent compare with the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in London
All most, Inuits are mindful of nature but europeans have polluting way of life whith cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.
To finish, the european's life its stressfully at the opposite of the inuit's life because of the inuit's area where all are white, appeasing, beautifull andcalmness
But if you go in inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there are fish.
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1. Réponse MathieuM
When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :
I saw the contrast behind the Inuit's and the European's lifestyles.
First, the Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when the European rest in their houses all the year because of their jobs (ils restent dans leur maison à cause de leur travail ???)
Secondly, the Europeans have social networks (pas de s pour les adjectifs ; par contre le nom en prend un) but they are alone whereas the Inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than European's schools.
Plus (next = après cela ; dans ce contexte cela ne va pas car cela introduit une action qui en suit une autre, tu voulais sans doute dire "en plus de cela" = Plus/besides/moreover), Inuit lives in skin tents with whalebone structures that are really different from the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in London.
Moreover, the Inuits are mindful of nature but the Europeans have polluting way of life whit cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.
To conclude, the european's life is stressful unlike Inuit's one because of the Inuit's area where everything is white, appeasing, beautiful and calm
But if you go to Inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there is fish.
Rappel :
1) devant les nationalités il faut l'article défini : the French ; the European ; The Inuits ; The British
2) tu confonds les adjectifs et les noms qui leur sont associés : calm / calmness.
3) pas de s pour les adjectifs , ils sont toujours invariables.