j'ai un dm d'anglais pour demain sur les inuits et mon niveau d'anglais est juste catastrophique donc si une âme charitable veut bien essayer de décrypter et de
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j'ai un dm d'anglais pour demain sur les inuits et mon niveau d'anglais est juste catastrophique donc si une âme charitable veut bien essayer de décrypter et de corriger mes fautes je lui en serais très reconnaissante.
Mon sujet est: after back in england, the narrator writes an article comparing the inuit european ways of life
je dois faire au minimum 200 mots. Voila mon texte :
When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestylesFirst, Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when european rest in his house all the year because of his jobSecundly, Europeans have socials network but are alone when inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's schoolNext, Inuit lives in skin tnts with whalebone frame works that are really diferent compare with the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in LondonAll most, Inuits are mindful of nature but europeans have polluting way of life whith cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.To finish, the european's life its stressfully at the opposite of the inuit's life because of the inuit's area where all are white, appeasing, beautifull andcalmnessBut if you go in inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there are fish.
Merci à tous !
Mon sujet est: after back in england, the narrator writes an article comparing the inuit european ways of life
je dois faire au minimum 200 mots. Voila mon texte :
When I arriving back in England I saw for the first time my country with a subjective viewpoint :I saw the contrast behind the inuit's and the european's lifestylesFirst, Inuit had summer and winter camps in locations they returned to year after years when european rest in his house all the year because of his jobSecundly, Europeans have socials network but are alone when inuits live in groups and have an oral history what are more togetherness than european's schoolNext, Inuit lives in skin tnts with whalebone frame works that are really diferent compare with the skyscrapers and the factories what we can see in LondonAll most, Inuits are mindful of nature but europeans have polluting way of life whith cars in all places, nuclear's energy and polluting factories.To finish, the european's life its stressfully at the opposite of the inuit's life because of the inuit's area where all are white, appeasing, beautifull andcalmnessBut if you go in inuit's area, don't forget to take fresh milk and vegetables because the only food over there are fish.
Merci à tous !
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1. Réponse MathieuM
When I arrived back in England, it was the first time I have seen my country with a subjective viewpoint: I figured out the contrast between Inuits' and Europeans' lifestyle. First, Inuits had Summer and Winter camps in location they used to come back to years after years whereas white people stay in the same house all the year for professional reasons.
Secondly, white people have social networks and yet, they feel alone. On the contraire, Inuits live in groups and transmit their History and their customs orally. This process is definitely more
Besides, Inuits live in tents made of skin and the structure is actually whales bones whereas in Europe, we have buildings and factories made of rock and metal.
Furthermore, Inuits are mindful of nature but Europeans have been polluting their environment with cars, nuclear plants and polluting factories. In order to finish, European life is stressful...