Bonjour. J'ai un petit texte à écrire en anglais, dont la question est Quelle nourriture as-tu mangé au pays de Galle ? L'as-tu aimée ? Etait-ce différent de ce
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Bonjour.
J'ai un petit texte à écrire en anglais, dont la question est "Quelle nourriture as-tu mangé au pays de Galle ? L'as-tu aimée ? Etait-ce différent de ce que tu manges d'habitude ?"
J'ai donc écrit ceci, et je voulais savoir si il y'avait des erreurs, que vous pourriez m'aider à corriger.
I chose food because it's like one of my favorite subject in the universe. For the diner, I mostly ate junk food. It was all about pizzas, pastas, french fries... which were great because I adulate all of these. The desserts were marvellous. I mean, the husband n the family must have been a confectionner in another life ! The lunches were just basic sandwiches, with only jam in it, nothing to write home about. One day, the man asked to my friends and I if we wanted some cheese in our sandwiches. We were overjoyed, because two ingredients are still better than only one. Well, thirty seconds later, we found out that if we wanted cheese, there will be no more ham in our sandwiches. That just shows how simple our lunches were, even though the onion rings which accompanied it were really tasty.
All this food was similar to the one I'm used to eat on a daily basis, but the last day we went to a fish&chips where we ate the ultimate English local food.
Merci d'avance :)
J'ai un petit texte à écrire en anglais, dont la question est "Quelle nourriture as-tu mangé au pays de Galle ? L'as-tu aimée ? Etait-ce différent de ce que tu manges d'habitude ?"
J'ai donc écrit ceci, et je voulais savoir si il y'avait des erreurs, que vous pourriez m'aider à corriger.
I chose food because it's like one of my favorite subject in the universe. For the diner, I mostly ate junk food. It was all about pizzas, pastas, french fries... which were great because I adulate all of these. The desserts were marvellous. I mean, the husband n the family must have been a confectionner in another life ! The lunches were just basic sandwiches, with only jam in it, nothing to write home about. One day, the man asked to my friends and I if we wanted some cheese in our sandwiches. We were overjoyed, because two ingredients are still better than only one. Well, thirty seconds later, we found out that if we wanted cheese, there will be no more ham in our sandwiches. That just shows how simple our lunches were, even though the onion rings which accompanied it were really tasty.
All this food was similar to the one I'm used to eat on a daily basis, but the last day we went to a fish&chips where we ate the ultimate English local food.
Merci d'avance :)
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1. Réponse MisterHipster
Ah mon avi tu devrais raccourcir la partie ou tu parles de ce que tu as mangé en enlevant des détails et parler plus des différences avec tes habitudes, quitte à comparer avec certains plats français ;-) Bonne soirée :)