bonjour pouvez vous me corriger les fautes svp c vraiment urgent

C'est juste sauf la dernière phrase.
C'est : For congrulate me, my parents bought me a perfume that smells too good.
Voilà :)

bonjour, I hope I helped ;-)

reviewed → revised
→but they also want me to do well in school
→ au futur: I will have the results the next day
mais pas au present
→**To congratulate me, my parents...