URGENT!!!!!!BONJOURS, J'ai une expression écrite en anglais pouvais vous m'aider svp AN IN CREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE THINK THAT WE SHOULD GIVE UP PIVATE CARS UN

i think those people are right because using private cars makes the amount of pollution increase. And it also create a heavy traffic that is the cause of the deadliest accidents.However using busses for exemple allows a lot of people to get to their destination at the same time so the amount of pollution decrises and the roads are less crowded, as well as using bycicles. So it is really time to break our habit and aim for other means of transport other than private cars.

J'espère que ceci t'aidera